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I wasn’t sure what was in the box, but I was Intrigued to find out what was inside the box. It was a ragged old box. It looked like it has been there for centuries, Cobwebs surrounding it and dust covering the sides and the top. I found a cloth, a spray and wiped it down and it became more clear and it came for me to open the box. I was excited to what was in the box. Then I looked and found it my birthday present a iphone 6/s. It was it was the best day ever but not only did it come with the phone it also came with $200.
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Monday 5 December 2016
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I love the way you described your story :):):)
ReplyDeleteLucky! I'm not sure what's better, the phone or the money! Try to use pronouns like "it" rather than saying "the box" all the time.
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